Review: Lovers’ Knot by Donald Hardy

Cornwall, 1906

After inheriting Trevaglan Farm from a distant relative, Jonathan Williams returns to the estate to take possession, with his best friend, Alayne, by his side. He’d only been to Trevaglan once before, fourteen years earlier when he’d been sent there after a family scandal and his mother’s death. But that was a different time; he’s a different person now, determined to put that experience out of his mind and his heart….

That summer, he’d been a lost and lonely young man. Healing came slowly; the hot summer days were filled with sunshine, the nearby ocean, and a new friend, Nat. Jonathan and the farmhand had quickly grown close, Jonathan needing comfort in the wake of his grief, and Nat basking in a peace and love he had never known could exist.

But that was also a summer of rumors and strange happenings in the surrounding countryside, of romantic triangles and wronged lovers. Tempers would flare like summer lightning, and fade just as quickly. By the summer’s end, one young man was dead, and another haunted for life.

Now Jonathan is determined to start anew. Until he starts seeing the ghost of his former friend everywhere he looks. Until mementos of that summer idyll reappear. Until Alayne’s life is in danger. Until the town’s resident witch tells Jonathan that ghosts are real. And this one is tied to Jonathan unto death…

Review by Hayden Thorne

This is going to be an unusual way of opening a review, and I might be getting some flack for it, but there’s a point to this.

To begin, I want to point out what I thought to be problematic things about Lovers’ Knot (bear with me, please). The romantic conflict (“I love him. I want to tell him. I don’t want to lose his friendship.”) happens to be my least favorite M/M source of angst. I’ve read so many stories that unfold along these lines, and majority of them simply fail in making me sympathize with the heroes, for all their incessant pining. Secondly, some of the dialogue between Jonathan and Alayne is somewhat clunky and awkward. The language isn’t stilted, no, but there’s a certain self-consciousness in the way the exchanges happen that gives them a false feeling. Ironically, it usually happens whenever they banter, and one would think that they’ve never really lived together in London for almost a decade. And thirdly, I find the novel’s villain to be – well – too convenient. The motive, especially, while understandable, doesn’t convince as much because of her single-mindedness in getting what she wants, which limits her characterization to an archetype: the lover scorned, with hardly any room for development.

Now that I’ve laid out the weaker points of this book, I can move on to the next bit.

I LOVE THIS NOVEL. Yes, I latched on to those issues pretty early on in the book, and they came back here and there in the course of reading, but by the time I finished, none of them mattered. None.

For all the heroes’ pining, they never wallow in it. They struggle internally, they fight against themselves and common sense, but on the whole, they’re also very pragmatic men. They mull over things and then decide on a course of action. We’re never treated to page after page of tedious “woe is me” moments. The novel’s villain, though an archetype, manages to rouse some sympathy in the end, given the nature of her punishment and the stupidity that took her to that point. In fact, nearly all of the principal players do some incredibly stupid things, but given the nature of their relationships as well as their relationship with the land, it’s not a surprise. In fact, they’re expected to be ruled largely by passion. The occasional awkward dialogue gets balanced by wonderfully detailed scene descriptions and a haunting (no pun intended), dreamy atmosphere.

Lovers’ Knot has a pretty simple storyline, both past and present. What Donald Hardy does, though, is flesh out his story in such a way as to make it much more complex and multi-layered. It’s a classic romantic tragedy, where the ending leaves you both happy for the lovers and completely heartbroken over the past and maybe even wondering “what if?” What if Nat survived? What if so-and-so gave up and moved on? How would the present look? There are so many gray areas that shape both the story and the characters (save for Alayne, who’s largely in the background and is more of an innocent bystander caught up in some pretty creepy happenings), and above all, the story left me thinking about connections, allegories, and so on, which is something I couldn’t help but do because of the book’s narrative structure.

The story unfolds with Jonathan’s past alternating with his present. Normally I’m not fond of this approach because it requires a pretty deft handling of two disparate and yet parallel (or cause and effect) storylines, and the author has to be careful in making sure that the significance of these flashbacks becomes evident as the present story unfolds. We get exactly that in Lovers’ Knot. Along with the juxtaposition of youth and innocence with maturity and world-weariness, we’re also treated to some wonderful contrast studies that add to the emotional resonance of Jonathan’s relationships with Nat and Alayne.

The setting is Cornwall, very rural, and steeped in history. Jonathan and Nat’s blossoming love affair is defined by rugged Nature, superstition, village rites, the sea, and eternity. The two consummate their love all over the place, hiding constantly, yet completely vulnerable and exposed. Their “wedding rite” is primitive yet a truer connection of souls. Their minister (that is, if they were to recruit one)? The village witch.

For the present, Jonathan and Alayne’s relationship is defined by silence, lies, obfuscation. They’re protected against Nature by man-made structures, separated from each other by physical walls, stairways, and social convention. The vicar and his wife come to visit, and while Mrs. Deane shows some liberal leanings, she remains held back and kept in her place by – yes – social convention. There’s certainly much to be said about age and wisdom, but at what price? Emotional asphyxiation? The sharp contrast of Jonathan’s present with his past forces you to think about what could’ve been.

The gray areas encompass the characters as well. There are a number of them, and they bring different things to the story in different ways, but save for maybe a handful, none of them’s a saint. Through their strengths and especially their frailties, they add so many human dimensions to an otherwise simple story. I find Penhyrddin a very fascinating character, and his mystique remains even after the climax of Jonathan’s past. It’s almost fitting, really, that he’s almost a living ghost, just hovering in the background, seeing as how Lovers’ Knot is both a romance as well as a classic ghost story.

What I’ve always loved about ghost stories is that, compared to monsters, for instance, these stories tend to be very psychological. Was the specter a figment of the imagination? Why would it appear to A and not B? What relationship is there between the dead and the living? Lovers’ Knot doesn’t take the easy way out in explaining the hauntings. If anything, the cause happens to be one of the more heart-rending elements in the novel, and its resolution doesn’t make it easier to take. M.R. James is also invoked, which makes me a very giddy James fangirl.

The setting and historical details are very, very well-done. On the whole, the novel has a certain dreamy, lethargic quality to it – becauase of the story’s pace (and I really love it when authors take their time) as well as the attention that Hardy gives to practically every moment. You’ll feel as though you really are in rural England, exposed to the elements, to history, tradition, and the supernatural. You can see, touch, hear, taste, and smell practically everything. His focus on the poor and the uneducated is much, much appreciated. Historical fiction oftentimes being narrowed to the upper-class and aristocracy, I’m always dying to read a book about the lower-class and the rural poor. I find their lives so diverse and so rich, and I think that they have much more to say to us about a country’s history than their wealthier counterparts. Hardy’s novel does exactly that. In fact, I’d go further and say that his approach brings to mind another Hardy – Thomas Hardy – including the elegiac undercurrents and vanishing traditions.

It’s been a long time since I’ve been moved and (no pun intended) haunted in such a way by a story I’ve read. The experience is wonderful and gratifying, and I certainly hope to see more books from this author.

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12 Responses

  1. Oh I’m so glad you liked this – I’ve been sitting on my hands in fear, but I shouldn’t have worried, should I? Donald will be thrilled. Thank you, Hayden!

  2. Thanks for this review. I am really looking forward to reading this book. I have my fingers crossed that the Kindle version will pop up on Amazon very soon.

    • Hi, Leslie!

      I’ve written to Running Press and asked when the E-Books version is coming out. No word back yet, but I’ll check again this week!


    • The RP electronic editions are kind of scrambled. Three of them are out on e-books but not kindle–

      and Tangled Web is on Kindle but not e-books. They did get that up, though, so Lovers Knot, Transgressions, and False Colors ought to get into the Kindle format soon. In the meantime–can you read other formats on the kindle?

      • Actually, I have purchased False Colors and Transgressions in Kindle versions back in April. When I searched Amazon for Tangled Web and Lover’s Knot, TW showed up this morning and I bought it. I am sure that Lover’s Knot will appear any day now — I just need to be patient….not my strong suit. LOL.

      • Leslie–that`s wild. I have searched for those three by name and author and get this message:

        Your search “Lover’s Knot by Donald Hardy” did not match any products in: Kindle Store › Kindle Books

        And it doesn`t matter where I put the apostrophe, which is mislocated for the paperback listing. Weird.

  3. I got my copy of this book today in the post after buying it on the strength of Alex Beecroft’s review and while I haven’t had time to do more than flick through it, I’m so excited to start reading! Even from the flick through, I got an incredible sense of how the land itself is a character and I think the comparison with Thomas Hardy is very apt in this and other regards.

    Thanks for the review, this is I think the third review of this book I’ve read and I already know it’s a keeper before I settle down with it properly tonight. Can’t wait!

  4. Hooray, hooray! Lover’s Knot has just appeared in the Kindle version at Amazon. It has been purchased and is on my Kindle. Yippee!

  5. I too loved this book. It’s long, plenty to get your teeth into, and the protagonists are attractive and real. The ‘I love him but I daren’t tell him ‘cos he’ll hate me for it’ theme that runs right through the book didn’t bother me, I found it both believable and useful, driving me onwards to see what happens.

    There were two very minor points I didn’t like – the cover and title I think don’t do it justice, although both are revealed to be appropriate once you’ve read the book, they need to attract readers who haven’t, and I think the title sounds corny and the cover picture looks wimpy.

    The other point that grated a little is use of language. Set in Cornwall, Hardy hasn’t fallen into the trap of trying to write Cornish dialect, although he allows himself a few snippets here and there. But ‘eedjit’ for idiot puts me firmly in Ireland, I’m afraid. And within the first twenty pages of the books there are a good half dozen uses of ‘out’ in context as ‘he walked out the room’ and I know some regional speech patterns drop the ‘of’ that I would have liked to see following the ‘out’, but this is narrative and I am surprised an editor didn’t pick that up.

    Like Hayden, I spotted blemishes and then ignored them and went on to enjoy the book immensely. It’s beautifully written, evocative of the wild and primitive landscape of Cornwall, and I will be remembering it for a long time. Once I’ve forgotten it I’ll be reading it again.

  6. I am late to the party but just want to say, I’m another one who pulled an all-nighter with this. Yay for ghost stories in the early AM!

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